Cov lus piav qhia ntawm kev nqis tes ua tam sim ntawd tom qab qhov teeb meem header - "Chaw thiab Sij Hawm" hauv ib qhov kev sau ntawv - thiab ua ntej ua ntej ntawm qhov tshwm sim tau tsim. Nws tsis tuaj yeem yuav pib ua qhov chaw nrog hais lus yam tsis tau taw qhia tsawg kawg ib kab uas tau koom nrog qhov xwm txheej thiab dab tsi tshwm sim.
Cov Lus Qhia
Kauj ruam 1
Tswv ntawm verbs
Qhia qhov yog ntawm kev piav qhia qhov ua ntawm koj tus cwj pwm, saib rau cov lus zoo tshaj plaws, ua yeeb yam, thiab tsis yog sau cia.
Hloov chaw ntawm "taug kev," nws yog raws kev coj, mus kev, ze, tshem tawm, khiav ceev, taug kev.
Hloov chaw rau "saib" - ntsia, ntsia, saib puas, txhav ib nrais muag, zoo li ze, pom, kev tshawb nrhiav, ua raws, soj nrog ib nrais muag, tshuaj xyuas, saib ib puag ncig, thiab lwm yam.
Siv cov lus qhia rau cov cim sau ua yeeb yam raws li cov kab. Cov no yog koj li cim, thiab tsis muaj leej twg paub zoo dua li koj ua li cas thiab lawv ua li cas.
Kauj ruam 2
Plaub txoj kab
Lwm lub npe rau txoj ntsiab cai no yog "Tau tshem tawm ntawm cov xim dub."
Txhaum cov lus piav qhia ntawm kev nqis tes ua rau hauv kab lus tsis ntau dua plaub kab ib, yog tias koj tus cwj pwm kev mus ncig ua si kav ob peb nplooj ntawv.
Hauv cov ntawv nyeem hloov kho, qhov no tuaj yeem ua tiav los ntawm kev teeb tsa tus kab mob tom qab pawg lus hauv cov chaw, lossis los ntawm kev siv kab tsis nyob hauv.
Thiab nyob rau hauv qhov kev pab cuam scripting, tsuas yog nias Enter kom tig ntawv dub los ua cov ntawv nyeem, nyeem kom yooj yim.
Frank Darabont, thaum tsim kev sim ua ntu rau ntawm Txoj Kev Taug Txoj Kev Tuag, tau nqis rau txhua kab. Tsis tas li ntawd, nws cuam tshuam cov nplooj ntawv piav qhia ntau ntawm cov yeeb yam nrog cov lus luv hais tawm cov kev xav ntawm tus neeg ua yeeb yam.
Rick Grimes raug yuam kom muab ib leeg xa ib lub ntiaj teb tshiab uas muaj cov zombies. Kaum ob ntawm nplooj ntawv tau sau nrog cov lus piav qhia ntawm yuav ua li cas nws tau tawm hauv tsev kho mob thiab sim mus xyuas seb muaj dab tsi tshwm sim thaum nws nyob hauv kev tsis nco qab.
"DOUBLE DOORS tom kawg ntawm txoj kev hauv tsev. Daim duab: Chaw noj mov."
Lub qhov rooj thaiv los ntawm ib tus ntoo cuam hnyav rau ntawm nplooj ntawv no. Lub qhov rooj leeg yog sib ntswg nrog lub ntsuas phoo xauv.
Cov kua mem tau pom thaum ua tsuag tsuag. Ntawm lub qhov rooj sab laug: "Tsis txhob qhib nws!" Thiab ntawm sab xis: "Tuag sab hauv!"
Rick ua kom zoo, maj mam, ua tib zoo thawb lub qhov rooj.
Cov qhov rooj pib txav mus zoo li yog muaj neeg thawb lawv ntawm sab xub ntiag. Qhov bar squeaks, txoj saw yog taut.
Rick staggers rov qab, ntsia hauv kev ntshai ntawm:
Ntiv tes tiv thaiv qhov sib txawv ntawm lub qhov rooj: tuag daj ntseg, writhing, nrhiav."
Kauj ruam 3
Kuv yuav piav qhia tus cwj pwm txawv li cas? Ua si!
Jack London tau sau nws "Lub Siab Ntawm Peb" tib lub sijhawm ntawm kev ua yeeb yaj kiab zaj duab xis.
Lub sijhawm, nws tau hais tias, cov kws sau ntawv Charles Goddard tau ua ntej ntawm tus kws sau ntawv, thiab lawv yuav tsum rov qab mus thiab pom zoo txog cov neeg hais dab neeg.
Yog li, Jack London tau lees tias nws tau khib Goddard, leej twg, tsis zoo li cov kws sau ntawv, tsis tas yuav nrhiav ntau pua cov lus los piav qhia txhua yam ntawm kev xav thiab kev xav ntawm cov cim. Nws yog qhov txaus rau nws los txiav txim qhov nws xav pom ntawm lub vijtsam thiab qhia hauv tus sau cov lus rau tus neeg ua yeeb yam "Qhia kev xyiv fab / kev tu siab / kev xav tsis thoob". Ib qho lo lus khawv koob - portray!
Niaj hnub no, txawm tias lub showrunner ntawm lub TV qhov tseem ceeb tsis tuaj yeem siv cov lus hais no thiab hais ncaj qha rau tus neeg ua yeeb yam hauv tus kws sau phau ntawv cov lus qhia. Ob leeg Shonda Rhimes, Joss Whedon, thiab Jane Espenson yuav tsum "piav qhia" qhov kev xav uas yuav tsum muaj lawv tus kheej - tag nrho nrog tib lub verbs uas, rau kev tshuaj ntsuam, yog cov cuab yeej ntawm tus kws txawj txua khoom.
Tab sis lub hauv paus ntsiab lus tseem nyob li qub:
Ntaus kev xav los ntawm kev nqis tes ua, tsis txhais.
Ib qho duab, tsis yog nqe lus piav qhia.
Qee zaum koj yuav xav tau cov lus piav qhia ib yam nkaus, tab sis yog tias koj tuaj yeem zam lawv thiab rov ua qhov chaw ntawd los ntawm kev qhia lus thiab kev tsim ntawm hom kev coj ua, siv lub sijhawm no.
Hloov chaw "ntsib kev ntshai," nws hais rov qab rau hauv kev ntshai, tshee, npog nws lub ntsej muag nrog nws ob txhais tes, tshee hnyo, lossis "khov thiab mloog."
Hloov ntawm "zoo siab, xav tias yuav yeej" - "luag nyav thiab txhuam nws txhais tes" lossis "zoo li zoo siab thiab so." Tom qab tag nrho, koj cov cim, zoo li cov neeg tiag tiag, sib txawv ntawm ib leeg thiab kev paub thiab qhia tus cwj pwm txawv hauv ntau txoj kev.
